Tuesday, September 24, 2013

an onion peeling – v2


hidden within
the stone, the fabric
a story unfolding
a spool unraveling
pages opening
layers of meaning
hidden, silent
words not nearly enough
an onion peeling
context and rhythm
history, emotion
connections forming
over time, slowly
as an onion peeling


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edited February 27, 2016
formed within the stone – v11
(editing original)
edited November 17, 2015
formed within the stone – v10
(editing version 4)
edited November 17, 2015
formed within the stone – v9
(editing version 5)
edited April 30, 2015
formed within the storm – v8
(editing version 4)
edited August 28, 2014
formed within the stone – v7
(editing version 2)
in response to question
about whether the horse in the liquid glass
was first in the mind of the artist or within the glass itself
Edited October 14, 2013
formed within the stone – v6
(editing original again)
edited October 9, 2013
formed within the stone – v5
edited October 9, 2013
formed within the stone – v4
edited October 9, 2013
formed within the stone – v3
edited October 9, 2013
formed within the stone – v2
new poem, October 9, 2013
formed within the stone
Edited September 29, 2013
an onion peeling – v3
(editing original again)
Edited September 24, 2013
an onion peeling – v2
September 21, 2013
an onion peeling
September 21, 2013
In the quiet moments
teaching at Katahdin Middle/ High School


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