Saturday, November 02, 2013

The Muffled Morning – v4


No sounds around me
everything muffled this morning
the air gray, cotton
no edge to the clouds
gathered down, around me
pulling me in

Brightening yet awash
with muted colors
a blanket of morning
dancing, alive before me
rain wrapped round us
not letting me go


Edited November 2, 2013
“The Muffled Morning – v4”
(editing version 2 again)
Edited October 31, 2013
“The Muffled Morning – v3”
Edited April 24, 2013
“The Muffled Morning – v2”
May 19, 2010
“The Muffled Morning”
about our walk to the
Pembroke Village School
Pembroke, NH
May 19, 2010
and the quiet this morning
because of the rain

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