Wednesday, October 08, 2014

A Heavy Presence – v2

Something dark remaining
not set free, released
a heavy presence in the air
a weight of some awful sorrow
Something hanging in the air
no peace for the residents
calm not finding them
asleep in the attic
held in its grip


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edited January 15, 2016
Entering with Them – v8
(merging edits to original, version 7, version 6, version 5,
version 4, version 3, and version 2)
edited December 4, 2015
Entering with Them – v7
(Editing original)
edited August 19, 2015
Entering with Them – v6
(editing version 2)
edited May 9, 2015
Entering with Them – v5
(editing original again)
Edited October 8, 2014
-          Entering with Them – v4
-          The Elders Gathered – v3
-          Feeling the peace of that moment – v3
-          Entering with Them – v3
-          Stillness in the Chapel – v3
-          A Kiss of Their Presence – v2
-          A Sense of a Presence – v2
-          A Heavy Presence – v2
-          The Weight of Their Presence – v2

edited May 27, 2015
behind their eyes – v2
new October 8, 2014
behind their eyes
edited June 11, 2015
The Rough Hewn Cross – v6
(editing version 5)
Edited October 13, 2013
“The Rough Hewn Cross – v5”
(editing version 4)
Edited September 2, 2013
“Standing in Their Presence – v3”
(editing original)
Edited July 16, 2013
-          “The Rough Hewn Cross – v4”
(editing original again)
-          “The Rough Hewn Cross – v3”
(editing version 2)
Edited November 29, 2012
-          “The Rough Hewn Cross – v2”
-           “The Elders Gathered – v2”
-           “Standing in Their Presence – v2”
-           “Feeling the Peace of that Moment – v2”
-           “Entering with Them – v2”
-           “Stillness in the Chapel – v2”
&
New poems November 29, 2012
-          “A Heavy Presence”
-           “A Kiss of Their Presence”
-          “The Weight of Their Presence”
-           “A Sense of Presence”
about certain places seeming to have
an aura of a physical manifestation
of the spirit world
&
earlier poems, June 9, 2010:
-          Feeling the peace of that moment
-          The Rough Hewn Cross
-          Standing in Their Presence
-          The Elders Gathered
-          Entering with Them
-          Stillness in the Chapel
about time in the outdoor chapel
at First Congregational Church of Pembroke
301 Pembroke Street
Pembroke, NH
June 7, 2010, about 7:45pm
&
Edited November 28, 2012
“Smell of Snow – v2”
Friday, December 03, 2004 8:27
“Smell of Snow”
and other poems
Edited September 20, 2012
“Snow in the Air – v2”
December 30, 2006 12:08
“Snow in the Air”


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