Friday, April 17, 2015

like milking silk

drawing them out
a hidden agenda
truth to explain
what is going on
the things yet unspoken.

like milking silk
coaxing each thread
from within them
more to reveal
in the colors within.

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edited April 18, 2015
like milking silk – v2
April 17, 2015
like milking silk
the enigma of some of the students,
trying to tease out what is going on with them
on a particular day.

&
edited October 27, 2014
the liquid holding a secret – v4
edited October 10, 2014
the liquid holding a secret – v3
(editing original again)
edited August 30, 2014
the liquid holding a secret – v2
edited August 30, 2014
the liquid holding a secret
edited August 29, 2014
hidden within the glass – v2
August 29, 2014
hidden within the glass
in response to question
about whether the horse in the liquid glass
was first in the mind of the artist or within the glass itself
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edited August 28, 2014
formed within the stone – v7
(editing version 2)
Edited October 14, 2013
formed within the stone – v6
(editing original again)
edited October 9, 2013
formed within the stone – v5
edited October 9, 2013
formed within the stone – v4
edited October 9, 2013
formed within the stone – v3
edited October 9, 2013
formed within the stone – v2
new poem, October 9, 2013
formed within the stone
Edited September 29, 2013
an onion peeling – v3
(editing original again)
Edited September 24, 2013
an onion peeling – v2
September 21, 2013
an onion peeling
September 21, 2013
In the quiet moments
teaching at Katahdin Middle/ High School

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