no skin, no flesh remaining, just the dry bones
maybe the veins and arteries,
a hint of the life it led
yes, that may be the best way
describing the little that remains
picked up, pulled from
the rising new-born grass shoots
as threadbare as old cheesecloth,
paper-bag-brown, soft
like corn starch to my touch
complicated intricate structures
a lattice, a spider’s web of design
just resting there, on the lawn,
pulled from the mulch, unearthed
uncovered in our furious raking
gathering in, the loss of last year’s fall
to be turned back into soil
an old leaf, maybe seeing in the brilliance of autumn
now as threadbare as old cheesecloth
a treasure to be found in the green of the moss
the rich whites and yellow
of the wild strawberry blossoms
hidden in plain view
for those who discover its beauty
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edited
July 7, 2018
As
threadbare as old cheesecloth – v7
(merging
edits to versions 5 and 6)
edited
July 7, 2018
As
threadbare as old cheesecloth – v6
(editing
original)
Edited
November 20, 2014
As
threadbare as old cheesecloth – v5
(editing
version 3)
edited
October 6, 2014
As
threadbare as old cheesecloth – v4
Edited
October 25, 2013
As
threadbare as old cheesecloth – v3
edited
November 14, 2011
As
threadbare as old cheesecloth – v2
May
21, 2009
As
threadbare as old cheesecloth
title
saved 12/27/08
edited
July 7, 2018
late
spring, early summer – v2
edited
July 7, 2018
the
skin of an ancient reptile – v3
adding
a third stanza
edited
July 7, 2018
the
skin of an ancient reptile – v2
July
7, 2018
late
spring, early summer
July
7, 2018
the
living map rolled out – v2
July
7, 2018
the
living map rolled out
July
7, 2018
the
skin of an ancient reptile
challenge
post on twitter page
“How
poetic can you be? Write a short poem about what you see!”
picture
of a leaf
Realistic
Poetry
&
edited
July 4, 2018
each
drop breathed, a prayer
edited
July 4, 2018
each
drop a prayer – v3
edited
July 4, 2018
each
drop a prayer – v2
July
3, 2018
each
drop a prayer
July
2, 2018
Pearls
and Jewels of Water on the Bloom
July
2, 2018
post
on the Realistic Poetry Twitter page,
a
picture of a orange lily covered in rain water
“How
poetic can you be? Write a short poem about what you see!”
edits
to last stanza of prior poem
edited
June 26, 2014
After
the Shower – v2
June
6, 2007 6:50
After
the Shower
Wesley
United Methodist Church
Concord,
NH
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