A Beat in Concord – v4

Sitting in traffic, waiting for the light
heat and humidity building in the van,
one window open to moist air after flooding
only there for a moment, in shadows
under the highway, waiting for light

A character, a caricature,
a man out of time on the sidewalk,
below the underpass, half in shadow
A beat, a throwback, caught in time
not a Ginsberg, no he wouldn’t Howl,
a modern day Kerouac, or one who aspired to be

Drawn to him, his gait, a slouched walk, tousled hair
his clothes, how he carried himself
bath sandals worn outside too long
oversized thrift store blazer, elbows patched
over a frock prom shirt, frilled, cranberry edging
hunched shoulders, time spent in dimly lit libraries,
before glowing computer screens, shaded lamps

A sense of the latte on his breath
languid scent of clove cigarettes in the wool of his coat
too warm for the day around him, sweltering
a mop of coarse black hair
that hadn’t seen a brush in days
sunken eyes, and a certainty, a deep knowing
oh, he’d written lines far darker than these
words that would confuse and provoke
unfairness of the mundane, inertia
bleakness of his bourgeois existence
unaware of his place, his role in the intelligentsia

A yawn at the coffee house, or maybe a demigod
reading urgent, sharp lines he might have written
(or so it certainly seemed, looking at him)
hard to say from across the street, fleetingly
driving by his path, for these few brief seconds
before my light turns green and I go down the road
away from the college-aged, but no-longer-in-college beat
on this humid Concord street

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edited April 16, 2015

A Beat in Concord – v7

http://raymondafoss.blogspot.com/2015/04/a-beat-in-concord-v7.html

(editing version 4)

Edited October 19, 2013

“A Beat in Concord – v6”

http://raymondafoss.blogspot.com/2013/10/a-beat-in-concord-v6.html

Edited July 2, 2013

“A Beat in Concord – v5”

http://raymondafoss.blogspot.com/2013/07/a-beat-in-concord-v5.html

based on original version

further edits June 30, 2012

A Beat in Concord – v4

http://raymondafoss.blogspot.com/2012/06/beat-in-concord-v4.html

(turning the poem to the present tense)

further edits June 30, 2012

A Beat in Concord – v3

http://raymondafoss.blogspot.com/2012/06/beat-in-concord-v3.html

further edited June 6, 2012 (with edited by Elisha and Marshall Burns)

A Beat in Concord – v2 - 2

http://raymondafoss.blogspot.com/2012/06/beat-in-concord-v2-2.html

edited June 6, 2012

A Beat in Concord – v2

http://raymondafoss.blogspot.com/2012/06/beat-in-concord-v2.html

written May 18, 2006 5:59pm

A Beat in Concord

http://raymondafoss.blogspot.com/2006/05/beat-in-concord.html

written about someone I saw under the Exit 14 underpass, Concord, NH

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