Nightfall – v7

The sun drops below the shoreline, the forest beyond;
Summer sky aglow, mirrored skin of the water
Ablaze in oranges, yellows, and shades of black.
 
Nightfall comes to the quiet, still, lake.
 
With effort I pull and push my canoe away from shore,
Longing for home, longing for warmth.
 
Waves swelled and fell, the canoe pitched and bobbed.
The paddle blade births luminous eddies by my side.
 
Great blue heron, regal, majestic,
Perches on a skeleton of an ancient pine,
Silhouetted before an Oriole sky.
 
Crossing the silken waters, no roadway, no map,
Colored lights on a deck, Elvis on the stereo.
 
Easy laughter rises from an invisible porch,
Dark houses, silent waters, failing light, all in shadows.
 
A beaver before me, swimming out in the lit waters.
He slaps his tail and dives, shallow near shore.
We cross again, again, repeating this dance.
 
A light flickers in my window, dimly through the screens,
The open porch calls me, my cabin in the lake, guides me home.
 
Night all around me, the world is still.
 
=================

Edited February 7, 2023

Nightfall – v7

 

edited March 21, 2021

Nightfall - v6

https://raymondafoss.blogspot.com/2021/03/nightfall-v6.html

edited September 28, 2017

Nightfall – v5

http://raymondafoss.blogspot.com/2017/09/nightfall-v5.html

Edited July 18, 2013

“Nightfall – v4”

http://raymondafoss.blogspot.com/2013/07/nightfall-v4.html

Edited July 15, 2013

“Nightfall – v3”

http://raymondafoss.blogspot.com/2013/07/nightfall-v3.html

Edited July 15, 2013

“Nightfall – v2”

http://raymondafoss.blogspot.com/2013/07/nightfall-v2.html

July 20, 2000

“Nightfall”

http://raymondafoss.blogspot.com/2004/02/nightfall.html

Written Thursday 7/20/00 at 9:50. It is about my two hour canoe ride

on Swains Lake from 7:15 to 9:20pm.

Barrington, NH

edited December 28, 2015

Alone in the Rain – revised – v2

http://raymondafoss.blogspot.com/2015/12/alone-in-rain-revised-v2.html

posted February 13, 2004

written August 13, 2000 1:53am

Alone in the Rain – revised

http://raymondafoss.blogspot.com/2004/02/alone-in-rain.html 

Written 6/18/2000

Alone in the Rain

same day as “Dew in the Morning”

http://raymondafoss.blogspot.com/2004/02/dew-in-morning-first-try.html

and

“Ten Feet Overhead”

http://raymondafoss.blogspot.com/2004/02/one-morning-on-swains-lake.html

 

 

All of my poems, photographs, and videos are copyrighted by Raymond A. Foss, 2000, 2001, 2002, 2003, 2004, 2005, 2006, 2007, 2008, 2009, 2010, 2011, 2012, 2013, 2014, 2015, 2016, 2017, 2018, 2019, 2020, 2021, 2022, and 2023. All rights are reserved. Contact me at Ray Foss (raymondafoss@gmail.com) for usage. See all 53k+ of my poems at www.raymondafoss.blogspot.com Poetry Where You Live.

 

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#Nightfall - v6

Nightfall – v6

The sun drops below the shoreline

below the forest beyond;

Summer sky aglow.

Still skin of the water

Ablaze in orange, yellow, and black.

Nightfall on the quiet, still, lake.

With effort I pull and push

The canoe away from shore.

Longing for warmth.

Waves swelled and fell.

The canoe pitched and bobbed.

The paddle blade leaves

Luminous eddies by my side.

Great blue heron

Regal, majestic,

Perched on a skeleton

Of the ancient pine,

Silhouetted before

An Oriole sky.

Crossing the silken waters

Not roadway, no map,

Colored lights on a deck,

Elvis on the stereo,

Easy laughter from an invisible porch.

Dark houses, silent waters,

Failing light, all in shadows.

A beaver before me.

Out in the lit waters.

He slaps his tail and dives

Shallow near shore.

We cross again, again,

Repeating this dance.

A light from my window,

Dimly through the screens,

The open porch, calling,

My cabin in the lake,

Guides me home.

Night all around me

The world is still.

=================

edited March 21, 2021

Nightfall - v6

edited September 28, 2017

Nightfall – v5

http://raymondafoss.blogspot.com/2017/09/nightfall-v5.html

Edited July 18, 2013

“Nightfall – v4”

http://raymondafoss.blogspot.com/2013/07/nightfall-v4.html

Edited July 15, 2013

“Nightfall – v3”

http://raymondafoss.blogspot.com/2013/07/nightfall-v3.html

Edited July 15, 2013

“Nightfall – v2”

http://raymondafoss.blogspot.com/2013/07/nightfall-v2.html

July 20, 2000

“Nightfall”

http://raymondafoss.blogspot.com/2004/02/nightfall.html

Written Thursday 7/20/00 at 9:50. It is about my two hour canoe ride

on Swains Lake from 7:15 to 9:20pm.

Barrington, NH

edited December 28, 2015

Alone in the Rain – revised – v2

http://raymondafoss.blogspot.com/2015/12/alone-in-rain-revised-v2.html

posted February 13, 2004

written August 13, 2000 1:53am

Alone in the Rain – revised

http://raymondafoss.blogspot.com/2004/02/alone-in-rain.html

Written 6/18/2000

Alone in the Rain

same day as “Dew in the Morning”

http://raymondafoss.blogspot.com/2004/02/dew-in-morning-first-try.html

and

“Ten Feet Overhead”

http://raymondafoss.blogspot.com/2004/02/one-morning-on-swains-lake.html

All of my poems, photographs, and videos are copyrighted by Raymond A. Foss, 2000, 2001, 2002, 2003, 2004, 2005, 2006, 2007, 2008, 2009, 2010, 2011, 2012, 2013, 2014, 2015, 2016, 2017, 2018, 2019, 2020, and 2021. All rights are reserved. Contact me at Ray Foss (raymondafoss@gmail.com) for usage. See all 53k+ of my poems at www.raymondafoss.blogspot.com Poetry Where You Live.

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Sounds of Creation – v2

Crashing waves on a rocky coast,

rain falling on parched ground

a crap of thunder echoing in the distance

The cry of a newborn baby, the call of

a fledgling Emperor Penguin chick

on the pack ice on his mother’s return

The crackle of wildfire, the bubble of lava,

the roar of a lion on the savannah

Branches clacking in a primordial wood,

like grasses, slaves of the wind

A caw of a macaw in the virgin rainforest,

a polar bear in pursuit of his dinner

A shriek of a hyena, the cacophony of the urban jungle

The beating of a hummingbird’s wings,

the buzz of an angry bee, a hungry mosquito

The thundering splash of the calving of glacial ice

Trumpets of elephants in danger

A tree falling in the wood (whether heard or not)

The haunting call of the loon

on a foggy summer night

A thwack of a beaver’s tail

The deep hollow crack of thick ice underfoot,

The words of a child’s prayer

These are sounds of creation.

================

edited July 7, 2018

Processes of Creation – v2

edited July 7, 2018

The Voice of Creation – v3

edited July 7, 2018

The Size of Creation – v2

edited July 7, 2018

The Words of Creation – v2

edited July 7, 2018

The Message of Creation – v3

(editing original)

edited July 7, 2018

The Context of Creation – v2

edited July 7, 2018

Sounds of Creation – v2

edited July 7, 2018

The Speed of Creation – v2

http://raymondafoss.blogspot.com/2018/07/the-speed-of-creation-v2.html

edited July 7, 2018

Creatures of Creation – v2

http://raymondafoss.blogspot.com/2018/07/creatures-of-creation-v2.html

edited July 7, 2018

Smells of Creation – v3

http://raymondafoss.blogspot.com/2018/07/smells-of-creation-v3.html

edited July 7, 2018

Tastes of Creation – v2

http://raymondafoss.blogspot.com/2018/07/800x600-normal-0-false-false-false-en.html

edited July 7, 2018

Textures of Creation – v2

http://raymondafoss.blogspot.com/2018/07/textures-of-creation-v2.html

&

started 8/1/07, added 8/19/07, 8/24/07, 8/26/07, 10/2/07

Processes of Creation

http://raymondafoss.blogspot.com/2007/10/processes-of-creation.html

&

edited July 11, 2015

The Voice of Creation – v2

http://raymondafoss.blogspot.com/2015/07/the-voice-of-creation-v2.html

May 8, 2008

The Voice of Creation

http://raymondafoss.blogspot.com/2008/05/voice-of-creation.html

Psalm 19:1-4

and Upper Room devotional

http://www.upperroom.org/Devotional/default.asp?month=5&day=8&year=2008&x=107&y=6

&

July 11, 2007 22:54

The Size of Creation

http://raymondafoss.blogspot.com/2007/07/size-of-creation.html

began notes June 2, 2007

Genesis 1

&

May 8, 2008

The Words of Creation

http://raymondafoss.blogspot.com/2007/07/size-of-creation.html

Psalm 19:1-4

and Upper Room devotional

http://www.upperroom.org/Devotional/default.asp?month=5&day=8&year=2008&x=107&y=6

&

edited June 26, 2014

The Message of Creation – v2

http://raymondafoss.blogspot.com/2014/06/the-message-of-creation-v2.html

May 8, 2008

The Message of Creation

http://raymondafoss.blogspot.com/2008/05/message-of-creation.html

Psalm 19:1-4

Walk to Emmaus, Means of Grace

and Upper Room devotional

http://www.upperroom.org/Devotional/default.asp?month=5&day=8&year=2008&x=107&y=6

&

Finished July 26, 2007 22:25

Textures of Creation

http://raymondafoss.blogspot.com/2007/07/textures-of-creation.html

Started July 11, 2007

Genesis 1

&

Started 7/8/07, added to 7/9/07 1:01AM

The Context of Creation

http://raymondafoss.blogspot.com/2007/07/context-of-creation.html

Genesis 1

&

edited August 3, 2014

Smells of Creation – v2

http://raymondafoss.blogspot.com/2014/08/smells-of-creation-v2.html

finished August 1, 2007 12:12

Smells of Creation

http://raymondafoss.blogspot.com/2007/08/smells-of-creation.html

started July 11, 2007

Genesis 1

&

Finished July 30, 2007 22:00

Tastes of Creation

http://raymondafoss.blogspot.com/2007/07/tastes-of-creation.html

Started July 11

Genesis 1

&

Finished July 30, 2007 21:40

Creatures of Creation

http://raymondafoss.blogspot.com/2007/07/creatures-of-creation.html

began draft June 2, 2007, update June 4, 2007, July 11, 2007

Genesis 1

&

Finished July 30, 2007 8:03

The Speed of Creation

http://raymondafoss.blogspot.com/2007/07/speed-of-creation.html

started July 11, 2007

Genesis 1

&

Finished July 30, 2007 7:55

Sounds of Creation

http://raymondafoss.blogspot.com/2007/07/sounds-of-creation.html

started July 11, 2007

Genesis 1

All of my poems, photographs, and videos are copyrighted by Raymond A. Foss, 2000, 2001, 2002, 2003, 2004, 2005, 2006, 2007, 2008, 2009, 2010, 2011, 2012, 2013, 2014, 2015, 2016, 2017, and 2018. All rights are reserved. Contact me at Ray Foss (raymondafoss@gmail.com) for usage. See all 47,210 of my poems at www.raymondafoss.blogspot.com Poetry Where You Live.

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#branches #child #creation #creator #Faith #forest #Genesis1 #God #hope #loons #Methodist #mother #Nature #NEUMC #PoetryWhereYouLive #sound #summer #wind #wings #sounds #cry #prayer #birth #song #crash #awe #noise #thunder #worship

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birds, bread, cicada, creation, creator, dawn, earth, Faith, Genesis 1, God, hawk, heart, human, life, light, Methodist, Nature, rainbow, sing, sound,

#speed #birds #bread #cicada #creation #creator #dawn #earth #Faith #Genesis 1 #God #hawk #heart #human #life #light #Methodist #Nature #rainbow #sing #sound #fast #slow #heartbeat #blinkofaneye #eternity #eons #epochs

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apple, bread, breath, dust, Faith, forest, fruit, garden, Genesis 1, God, grass, lilacs, lilies, lily of the valley, Nature, ocean, orange, rose, shower, snow,

#smells #creation #apple #bread #breath #dust #Faith #forest #fruit #garden #Genesis1 #God #grass #lilacs #lilies #lilyofthevalley #Nature #ocean #orange #rose #shower #snow #creator #sight  #touch #senses #taste #touch

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birds, brown, butterflies, creation, creator, deer, Faith, forest, garden, gardener, Genesis 1, God, hawk, love, Methodist, Nature, sheep, shepherd, starfish, turkeys,

#creatures #created #birds #brown #butterflies #creation #creator #deer #Faith #forest #garden #gardener #Genesis1 #God #hawk #love #Methodist #Nature #sheep #shepherd #starfish #turkeys #reptile #amphibian #mammal #microbe #onecelled

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Nightfall – v5

The sun drops below the shore;

Summer sky aglow.

Still skin of the water

Ablaze in orange, yellow, and black.

Nightfall on the lake.

I pull and push

The canoe away from shore.

Longing for warmth.

Waves swelled and fell.

The canoe pitched and bobbed.

The paddle blade leaves

Luminous eddies beside me.

Great blue heron

Perched on a skeleton

Of the ancient pine,

Silhouetted before an

Oriole sky.

Crossing the silken waters

Colored lights on a deck,

Elvis on the stereo,

Easy laughter from an invisible porch.

Dark houses, silent waters,

Failing light, all in shadows.

A beaver before me.

Out in the lit waters.

He slaps his tail and dives

Shallow near shore.

We cross again,

Repeating this dance.

A light from my window,

My cabin in the lake,

Guides me home.

Night all around me

The world is still.

=================

edited September 28, 2017

Nightfall – v5

Edited July 18, 2013

“Nightfall – v4”

http://raymondafoss.blogspot.com/2013/07/nightfall-v4.html

Edited July 15, 2013

“Nightfall – v3”

http://raymondafoss.blogspot.com/2013/07/nightfall-v3.html

Edited July 15, 2013

“Nightfall – v2”

http://raymondafoss.blogspot.com/2013/07/nightfall-v2.html

July 20, 2000

“Nightfall”

http://raymondafoss.blogspot.com/2004/02/nightfall.html

Written Thursday 7/20/00 at 9:50. It is about my two hour canoe ride

on Swains Lake from 7:15 to 9:20pm.

Barrington, NH

edited December 28, 2015

Alone in the Rain – revised – v2

http://raymondafoss.blogspot.com/2015/12/alone-in-rain-revised-v2.html

posted February 13, 2004

written August 13, 2000 1:53am

Alone in the Rain – revised

http://raymondafoss.blogspot.com/2004/02/alone-in-rain.html  

Written 6/18/2000

Alone in the Rain

same day as “Dew in the Morning”

http://raymondafoss.blogspot.com/2004/02/dew-in-morning-first-try.html

and

“Ten Feet Overhead”

http://raymondafoss.blogspot.com/2004/02/one-morning-on-swains-lake.html

All of my poems, photographs, and videos are copyrighted by Raymond A. Foss, 2000, 2001, 2002, 2003, 2004, 2005, 2006, 2007, 2008, 2009, 2010, 2011, 2012, 2013, 2014, 2015, 2016, and 2017. All rights are reserved. Contact me at Ray Foss (raymondafoss@gmail.com) for usage. See all 45,020 of my poems at www.raymondafoss.blogspot.com Poetry Where You Live.

Canoe, dew, dove, Faith, feet, home, hope, leaves, loons, Nature, poetry, Poetry Where You Live, rain, rock, sun, water, Writing Poetry, yellow, National Poetry Day,

#Canoe #ConcordNH #dew #dove #Faith #feet #home #hope #leaves #loons #Nature #poetry #rain #rock #sun #water #WritingPoetry #yellow #NationalPoetryDay