Tuesday, March 25, 2014

The Shining City – v6

I saw a mere glimpse today
(or was it just a vision
the gossamer of night)
a fleeting cherished image
of the shining city on the hill,
the promise of our future
a city with the streets of gold
high on the horizon on the mountainside

The sun a flaming ball perched there
suspended as if by wires
with tongues of orange and yellow,
gleaming across the heavens
rich crimsons and purples on the hills,
the living clouds, dancing,
as the sunset filled
my peripheral view

Seared into my memory
this moment this vision
a fleeting cherished image
of the beauty of the moving color
the fleeting scene, captured,
held within my mind
before it fell behind the distant hills
melting into the darkening sky


edited March 25, 2014
The Shining City – v6
Edited December 16, 2013
The Shining City – v5
Edited December 16, 2013
The Shining City – v4
(editing original again)
edited July 20, 2008,
The Shining City – v3
based on comments
from Chrissy Siggee, on faithwriters.com
received on 7/18.
December 11, 2006 21:55
The Shining City

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