Monday, December 15, 2014

Muffled This Morning – v5

The sounds caught
as if in a spider’s web
the lowered clouds
with the sounds in their grasp

Muffled this morning
the world slow awakening
the mist of the morning
silencing the dawn

As if through cotton batting
the air pregnant, thinking,
muffled this morning
so slow to awake


edited December 15, 2014
Muffled This Morning – v5

(editing version 3)
edited November 8, 2014
Muffled This Morning – v4
(editing original again)
edited April 11, 2014
“Muffled This Morning – v3”
(editing original version)
Edited April 24, 2013
“Muffled This Morning – v2”
May 19, 2010
“Muffled This Morning”
about our walk to the
Pembroke Village School
Pembroke, NH
May 19, 2010
and the quiet this morning
because of the rain


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