how
should I describe them
so
troubled in their spirit
vulnerable,
anxious
a
fish out of water
naïve,
open
not
sure of tomorrow
a
young bird falling
from
a tree
a
metaphor, portend
foreshadowing
the journey
blind
in walking
out
into the unknown
Edited November 23, 2013
“a young bird falling from a tree – v2”
March 7, 2013 and March 8, 2013
new poem, “a young bird falling from a tree”
inspired by reading of poem, “Fish Out of Water”,
by Lisa Gallant Seal
and lines,
“a fish out of water
a young bird falling from a tree”
at the Poet’s Corner
Suncook Senior Center
March 4, 2013
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[ Smiles ] A poem with an original style.
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