sharper needles – v3

with sharper needles

piercing the façade, the mask

cutting deeper, truly

deep down within us

the tattoo, the scarring

written on hearts

ink on our souls

permanent, lasting

tearing us, ripping

our life in pieces

written in blood

edited January 21, 2014

“sharper needles – v3”

(editing original again)

Edited August 30, 2013

“sharper needles – v2”

http://raymondafoss.blogspot.com/2013/08/sharper-needles-v2.html

new poem August 30, 2013

“sharper needles”

http://raymondafoss.blogspot.com/2013/08/sharper-needles.html

new poem August 30, 2013

“tattooed with pain”

http://raymondafoss.blogspot.com/2013/08/tattooed-with-pain.html

Edited August 22, 2013

“eyes not shut

http://raymondafoss.blogspot.com/2013/08/eyes-not-shut-v2.html

August 22, 2013

“eyes not shut”

http://raymondafoss.blogspot.com/2013/08/eyes-not-shut.html

August 22, 2013

“tattooed on the inside”

http://raymondafoss.blogspot.com/2013/08/tattooed-on-inside.html

a poem in response to poem

 “TATTOOS AND ATTITUDE”

https://www.facebook.com/chip.bergeron2/posts/503630106394453

by Chip Bergeron

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