Entering the small sanctuary
the dome of the roof
the bright sun shining
upon this sacred space
Feeling the elders
saints who laid the path
this space of worship
this hallowed ground
Trying to keep our daughters quiet
that I would hear the whispers
the truth of our faith
murmured by ancient tongues
Stilling myself for a moment
a sense of the weight of this place
the saints before us, gathered,
led by your wondrous grace
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edited January 15, 2016
Entering with Them – v8
(merging edits to original, version 7, version 6, version 5,
version 4, version 3, and version 2)
edited December 4, 2015
Entering with Them – v7
(Editing original)
edited August 19, 2015
Entering with Them – v6
(editing version 2)
edited May 9, 2015
Entering with Them – v5
(editing original again)
Edited October 8, 2014
-
Entering with Them – v4
-
The Elders Gathered – v3
-
Feeling the peace of that moment – v3
-
Entering with Them – v3
-
Stillness in the Chapel – v3
-
A Kiss of Their Presence – v2
-
A Sense of a Presence – v2
-
A Heavy Presence – v2
-
The Weight of Their Presence – v2
edited
May 27, 2015
behind
their eyes – v2
new
October 8, 2014
behind
their eyes
edited
June 11, 2015
The
Rough Hewn Cross – v6
(editing
version 5)
Edited
October 13, 2013
“The
Rough Hewn Cross – v5”
(editing version 4)
Edited September 2, 2013
“Standing in Their Presence – v3”
(editing original)
Edited
July 16, 2013
-
“The
Rough Hewn Cross – v4”
(editing original again)
-
“The
Rough Hewn Cross – v3”
(editing version 2)
Edited November 29, 2012
-
“The Rough Hewn Cross – v2”
-
“The Elders Gathered –
v2”
-
“Standing in Their
Presence – v2”
-
“Feeling the Peace of
that Moment – v2”
-
“Entering with Them – v2”
-
“Stillness in the Chapel
– v2”
&
New poems November 29, 2012
-
“A Heavy Presence”
-
“A Kiss of Their
Presence”
-
“The Weight of Their Presence”
-
“A Sense of Presence”
about certain places seeming to have
an aura of a physical manifestation
of the spirit world
&
earlier
poems, June 9, 2010:
-
Feeling
the peace of that moment
-
The
Rough Hewn Cross
-
Standing
in Their Presence
-
The
Elders Gathered
-
Entering
with Them
-
Stillness
in the Chapel
about
time in the outdoor chapel
at
First Congregational Church of Pembroke
301
Pembroke Street
Pembroke,
NH
June
7, 2010, about 7:45pm
&
Edited
November 28, 2012
“Smell
of Snow – v2”
Friday,
December 03, 2004 8:27
“Smell
of Snow”
and
other poems
Edited
September 20, 2012
“Snow
in the Air – v2”
December
30, 2006 12:08
“Snow
in the Air”
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