Showing posts with label humidity. Show all posts
Showing posts with label humidity. Show all posts

Tuesday, April 07, 2015

Sticky Air – v7

Now suddenly summer
not yet hot, humidity
burning off the morning
a coolness of spring
but weight in the air
complete saturation

Yet the sounds, the motion
the waking of new morning
tamped down, slowed
as if by heavy, sticky air

The web of the morning clouds
lowered from the heavens
falling from the skies
as though an invisible blanket falling
our world ensnared, wrapped,
in the waves of the heat

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edited April 7, 2015
Sticky Air – v7

(editing version 3 again)
edited April 5, 2014
“Sticky Air – v6”
(editing version 3 again)
Edited January 5, 2014
“Sticky Air – v5”
(editing version 3)
Edited November 2, 2013
“Sticky Air – v4”
(editing version 2)
Edited June 2, 2013
“Sticky Air – v3”
Edited April 24, 2013
“Sticky Air – v2”
May 19, 2010
“Sticky Air”
about our walk to the
Pembroke Village School
Pembroke, NH
May 19, 2010
and the quiet this morning
because of the rain

All of my poems are copyrighted by Raymond A. Foss, 2000, 2001, 2002, 2003, 2004, 2005, 2006, 2007, 2008, 2009, 2010, 2011, 2012, 2013, 2014, 2015. All rights reserved. Contact me at Ray Foss for usage. See all 36,890+ of my poems at www.raymondafoss.blogspot.com Poetry Where You Live.

Saturday, February 28, 2015

Air given substance – v3

Air given substance
mass, dimension,
as if we could cut it
and serve it on a plate

Now suddenly summer
not hot, humid, but thick
burning off the morning,
a coolness of spring
weight in the air

the sounds, the motion,
waking of new morning,
tamped down, slowed;
the minutes longer
as if by heavy, sticky air

A web of the morning
lowered to the ground
as though an invisible blanket;
our world ensnared, wrapped
in the waves of the heat

Air given substance
form, function,
as if it was a bed of kelp
in the tidal seas

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edited February 28, 2015
air given substance – v3

(editing version 2)
Edited August 23, 2013
“Air given substance – v2”
New poem June 2, 2013
“Air given substance”
Edited June 2, 2013
“Sticky Air – v3”
Edited April 24, 2013
“Sticky Air – v2”
May 19, 2010
“Sticky Air”
about our walk to the
Pembroke Village School
Pembroke, NH
May 19, 2010
and the quiet this morning
because of the rain


All of my poems are copyrighted by Raymond A. Foss, 2000, 2001, 2002, 2003, 2004, 2005, 2006, 2007, 2008, 2009, 2010, 2011, 2012, 2013, 2014, 2015. All rights reserved. Contact me at Ray Foss (raymondafoss@gmail.com) for usage. See all 40,080+ of my poems at www.raymondafoss.blogspot.com Poetry Where You Live.

Saturday, April 05, 2014

Sticky Air – v6

Now suddenly summer
hot, humidity
a blanket, a cloth
heavy upon us, urgent
burning off the morning
a coolness of spring
weight in the air

Yet the sounds, the motion
as if through cotton batting
early today, trip to school,
waking of new morning
tamped down, slowed
as if by heavy, sticky air

The web of the morning clouds
lowered to the ground
falling, filling the valley
the way down the hill, to home,
as through an invisible blanket
our world ensnared, wrapped
in the waves of the heat


edited April 5, 2014
“Sticky Air – v6”
(editing version 3 again)
Edited January 5, 2014
“Sticky Air – v5”
(editing version 3)
Edited November 2, 2013
“Sticky Air – v4”
(editing version 2)
Edited June 2, 2013
“Sticky Air – v3”
Edited April 24, 2013
“Sticky Air – v2”
May 19, 2010
“Sticky Air”
about our walk to the
Pembroke Village School
Pembroke, NH
May 19, 2010
and the quiet this morning
because of the rain

All of my poems are copyrighted by Raymond A. Foss, 2000, 2001, 2002, 2003, 2004, 2005, 2006, 2007, 2008, 2009, 2010, 2011, 2012, 2013, 2014. All rights reserved. Contact me at Ray Foss for usage. See all 28,830+ of my poems at www.raymondafoss.blogspot.com Poetry Where You Live.

Sunday, January 05, 2014

Sticky Air – v5

Now suddenly summer
heat, humidity
burning off the morning
a coolness of spring
weight in the air

Yet the sounds, the motion
waking of new morning
tamped down, slowed
as if by heavy, sticky air

The web of the morning clouds
lowered to the ground
though an invisible blanket
our world ensnared, wrapped
in the waves of the heat


Edited January 5, 2014
“Sticky Air – v5”

(editing version 3)
Edited November 2, 2013
“Sticky Air – v4”
(editing version 2)
Edited June 2, 2013
“Sticky Air – v3”
Edited April 24, 2013
“Sticky Air – v2”
May 19, 2010
“Sticky Air”
about our walk to the
Pembroke Village School
Pembroke, NH
May 19, 2010
and the quiet this morning
because of the rain

All of my poems are copyrighted by Raymond A. Foss, 2000, 2001, 2002, 2003, 2004, 2005, 2006, 2007, 2008, 2009, 2010, 2011, 2012, 2013, 2014. All rights reserved. Contact me at Ray Foss for usage. See all 27,230+ of my poems at www.raymondafoss.blogspot.com Poetry Where You Live.

Wednesday, September 11, 2013

with shape and dimension – v3


with shape and dimension
the air a living presence
invisible yet with mass
with form
and density

heavy in breathing
in any exertion
the air this Sunday morning
with life
and gravity


Edited September 11, 2013
‘with shape and dimension – v3”
New poem June 2, 2013
‘with shape and dimension”
New poem June 2, 2013
“Air given substance”
Edited June 2, 2013
“Sticky Air – v3”
Edited April 24, 2013
“Sticky Air – v2”
May 19, 2010
“Sticky Air”
about our walk to the
Pembroke Village School
Pembroke, NH
May 19, 2010
and the quiet this morning
because of the rain

All of my poems are copyrighted by Raymond A. Foss, 2000, 2001, 2002, 2003, 2004, 2005, 2006, 2007, 2008, 2009, 2010, 2011, 2012, 2013. All rights reserved. Contact me at Ray Foss for usage. See all 23,460+ of my poems at http://www.raymondafoss.blogspot.com Poetry Where You Live.

Friday, August 23, 2013

Air given substance – v2


Air given substance
mass, dimensions
as if we could cut it
and serve it on a plate

Now suddenly summer
hot, humid, thick
burning off the morning
a coolness of spring
weight in the air

Yet the sounds, the motion
waking of new morning
tamped down, slowed
the minutes longer
as if by heavy, sticky air

Web of the morning
lowered to the ground
as though an invisible blanket
our world ensnared, wrapped
in the waves of the heat

Air given substance
form, function
as if it was a bed of kelp
in the tidal waters


Edited August 23, 2013
“Air given substance – v2”
New poem June 2, 2013
“Air given substance”
Edited June 2, 2013
“Sticky Air – v3”
Edited April 24, 2013
“Sticky Air – v2”
May 19, 2010
“Sticky Air”
about our walk to the
Pembroke Village School
Pembroke, NH
May 19, 2010
and the quiet this morning
because of the rain

All of my poems are copyrighted by Raymond A. Foss, 2000, 2001, 2002, 2003, 2004, 2005, 2006, 2007, 2008, 2009, 2010, 2011, 2012, 2013. All rights reserved. Contact me at Ray Foss for usage. See all 24,800+ of my poems at www.raymondafoss.blogspot.com Poetry Where You Live.

Tuesday, July 02, 2013

with shape and dimension – v2


with shape and dimension
the very air a living presence
invisible yet with mass, density,
with form and substance

heavy in my breathing
in any exertion
the air this Sunday morning
with life and gravity


Edited July 2, 2013
“with shape and dimension – v2”
New poem June 2, 2013
‘with shape and dimension”
New poem June 2, 2013
“Air given substance”
Edited June 2, 2013
“Sticky Air – v3”
Edited April 24, 2013
“Sticky Air – v2”
May 19, 2010
“Sticky Air”
about our walk to the
Pembroke Village School
Pembroke, NH
May 19, 2010
and the quiet this morning
because of the rain

All of my poems are copyrighted by Raymond A. Foss, 2000, 2001, 2002, 2003, 2004, 2005, 2006, 2007, 2008, 2009, 2010, 2011, 2012, 2013. All rights reserved. Contact me at Ray Foss for usage. See all 23,550+ of my poems at www.raymondafoss.blogspot.com Poetry Where You Live.

Monday, June 03, 2013

with shape and dimension


with shape and dimension
the air a living presence
invisible yet with mass
form and density

heavy in breathing
in any exertion
the air this Sunday morning
with life and gravity


New poem June 2, 2013
‘with shape and dimension”

New poem June 2, 2013
“Air given substance”
Edited June 2, 2013
“Sticky Air – v3”
Edited April 24, 2013
“Sticky Air – v2”
May 19, 2010
“Sticky Air”
about our walk to the
Pembroke Village School
Pembroke, NH
May 19, 2010
and the quiet this morning
because of the rain

All of my poems are copyrighted by Raymond A. Foss, 2000, 2001, 2002, 2003, 2004, 2005, 2006, 2007, 2008, 2009, 2010, 2011, 2012, 2013. All rights reserved. Contact me at Ray Foss for usage. See all 23,500+ of my poems at www.raymondafoss.blogspot.com Poetry Where You Live.

Sunday, June 02, 2013

Air given substance


Air given substance
mass, dimensions
as if we could cut it
and serve it on a plate

Now suddenly summer
hot, humidity
burning off the morning
a coolness of spring
weight in the air

Yet the sounds, the motion
waking of new morning
tamped down, slowed
as if by heavy, sticky air

Web of the morning
lowered to the ground
though an invisible blanket
our world ensnared, wrapped
in the waves of the heat

Air given substance
form, function
as if it was a bed of kelp
in the tidal waters


New poem June 2, 2013
“Air given substance”
Edited June 2, 2013
“Sticky Air – v3”
Edited April 24, 2013
“Sticky Air – v2”
May 19, 2010
“Sticky Air”
about our walk to the
Pembroke Village School
Pembroke, NH
May 19, 2010
and the quiet this morning
because of the rain

All of my poems are copyrighted by Raymond A. Foss, 2000, 2001, 2002, 2003, 2004, 2005, 2006, 2007, 2008, 2009, 2010, 2011, 2012, 2013. All rights reserved. Contact me at Ray Foss for usage. See all 23,500+ of my poems at http://www.raymondafoss.blogspot.com Poetry Where You Live.

Sticky Air – v3


Now suddenly summer
hot, humidity
burning off the morning
a coolness of spring
weight in the air

Yet the sounds, the motion
waking of new morning
tamped down, slowed
as if by heavy, sticky air

The web of the morning clouds
lowered to the ground
though an invisible blanket
our world ensnared, wrapped
in the waves of the heat



Edited June 2, 2013
“Sticky Air – v3”
Edited April 24, 2013
“Sticky Air – v2”
May 19, 2010
“Sticky Air”
about our walk to the
Pembroke Village School
Pembroke, NH
May 19, 2010
and the quiet this morning
because of the rain

All of my poems are copyrighted by Raymond A. Foss, 2000, 2001, 2002, 2003, 2004, 2005, 2006, 2007, 2008, 2009, 2010, 2011, 2012, 2013. All rights reserved. Contact me at Ray Foss for usage. See all 23,500+ of my poems at http://www.raymondafoss.blogspot.com Poetry Where You Live.