Saturday, February 28, 2015

Air given substance – v3

Air given substance
mass, dimension,
as if we could cut it
and serve it on a plate

Now suddenly summer
not hot, humid, but thick
burning off the morning,
a coolness of spring
weight in the air

the sounds, the motion,
waking of new morning,
tamped down, slowed;
the minutes longer
as if by heavy, sticky air

A web of the morning
lowered to the ground
as though an invisible blanket;
our world ensnared, wrapped
in the waves of the heat

Air given substance
form, function,
as if it was a bed of kelp
in the tidal seas

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edited February 28, 2015
air given substance – v3

(editing version 2)
Edited August 23, 2013
“Air given substance – v2”
New poem June 2, 2013
“Air given substance”
Edited June 2, 2013
“Sticky Air – v3”
Edited April 24, 2013
“Sticky Air – v2”
May 19, 2010
“Sticky Air”
about our walk to the
Pembroke Village School
Pembroke, NH
May 19, 2010
and the quiet this morning
because of the rain


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