Tuesday, April 07, 2015

Sticky Air – v7

Now suddenly summer
not yet hot, humidity
burning off the morning
a coolness of spring
but weight in the air
complete saturation

Yet the sounds, the motion
the waking of new morning
tamped down, slowed
as if by heavy, sticky air

The web of the morning clouds
lowered from the heavens
falling from the skies
as though an invisible blanket falling
our world ensnared, wrapped,
in the waves of the heat

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edited April 7, 2015
Sticky Air – v7

(editing version 3 again)
edited April 5, 2014
“Sticky Air – v6”
(editing version 3 again)
Edited January 5, 2014
“Sticky Air – v5”
(editing version 3)
Edited November 2, 2013
“Sticky Air – v4”
(editing version 2)
Edited June 2, 2013
“Sticky Air – v3”
Edited April 24, 2013
“Sticky Air – v2”
May 19, 2010
“Sticky Air”
about our walk to the
Pembroke Village School
Pembroke, NH
May 19, 2010
and the quiet this morning
because of the rain

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