ice more than frost
on the flat surfaces
flat and slanted
even the doorway
all covered, frozen
temperature still falling
well below freezing
that dark, dark night
melting only by applying
the exhaust of the engine
the car awakening slowly
from its skin of ice
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edited April 10, 2015
Ice more than Frost – v5
(editing original again)
about a different night with black ice
&
edited October 27, 2014
Ice more than Frost – v3
(editing original again)
edited February 12, 2014
“Ice more than Frost – v2”
new poem October 23, 2013
“Ice more than Frost”
driving from Patten to Stacyville and
view of Mt. Katahdin
October 23, 2013
edited April 8, 2015
painted with grains of sand – v7
(editing version 3)
Edited September 17, 2013
painted with grains of sand – v6
(editing version 3)
Edited December 15, 2012
“painted with grains of sand – v5”
reediting version 3
&
Edited December 11, 2012
“painted with grains of sand – v4”
based on suggestions by Jacob Montgomery,
of Bournemouth, England
&
Edited December 10, 2012
“painted with grains of sand – v3”
after emailing earlier version to Jacob Montgomery,
Bournemouth, England
&
Edited December 10, 2012
“painted with grains of sand – v2”
November 20, 2012
“painted with grains of sand”
one of several poems about drive yesterday
the fields were alive with frost this morning
on NH Route 107 in Epsom, NH, Southbound,
with many vistas of white over the reeds and grain
stalks, as
at 43.213132,-71.285279
going to the Deerfield Community School
November 19, 2012
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