Saturday, January 16, 2016

blowing out the candles – v3

At the beginning, as we enter in
There are two candles burning
coming together, joining,
lighting one candle;
Blowing out the candles
of their separate lives.
Now there is one candle burning
a symbol of their union;
Together growing stronger
shining a shared light.

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edited January 16, 2016
blowing out the candles – v3

(merging edits to original and version 2)
edited July 7, 2015
blowing out the candles – v2
May 8, 2015
blowing out the candles
&
edited July 7, 2015
grounded in the same soil – v2
May 8, 2015
grounded in the same soil
&
edited July 7, 2015
woven together – 2 – v2
May 9, 2015
woven together - 2
&
edited July 7, 2015
Loyalty, to the death – v4
(editing original)
edited July 7, 2015
Loyalty, to the death – v3
(editing version 2)
edited June 6, 2015
Loyalty, to the death – v2
May 8, 2015
Loyalty, to the death
&
edited July 7, 2015
love totally – v2
May 8, 2015
love totally
&
edited July 23, 2015
Changing the ancient words – 3 – v3
(editing version 2)
edited July 7, 2015
Changing the ancient words – 3 – v2
May 8, 2015
Changing the ancient words - 3
1 Corinthians 13:1-13
Ruth 1:15-17
Romans 12:1-2, 9-19
wedding of Helene Marion Thompson
and Zachary Carl Crabtree
Communion
Prayer
by Pastor Ruth Foss
sermon blog
meditation blog
Stetson Memorial United Methodist Church
Patten, ME
May 2, 2015

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