Sunday, January 05, 2014

Under the sky – v2

My best present, all of you,
of any Christmas, any holiday
becoming man and wife, children,
our whole family together
married under the sky
in the park, the cold,
that early-winter morning

They were watching
our three daughters
already formed people
Little ones I cherish
hearing our vows, our promise,
the ancient words of Ruth
your name changing
joyful in the cold, the snow

Snowing as we kissed
cold under the blue, the clouds
flakes on my shoulder, my tie
becoming one together
Pledging our love to each other
under the snowy sky
that early-winter morning


edited January 5, 2014
under the sky – v2
December 19, 2013
under the sky
written as part of the third of three classes
at Katahdin Middle High School
about Ruth and my wedding in 2004
&
Edited December 14, 2013
Snow on the Mountain – v3
December 13, 2013
Snow on the Mountain
(as Lisa Timberlake copied it from the board)
presentation:
Snow on the Mountain
Nouns, Verbs and Adjectives exercise
with 8th Grade students
at Katahdin Middle High School
December 13, 2013

NOUNS:  winter, caterpillars, snow, prints, below 0, clouds, skiy, sled, Katahdin, ice, igloo, Santa, ham, snowcap, shoes, moose, trees, presents, speedos, fire

VERBS:  eating, snowing, climb, fishing, skating, drifting, sledding,

ADJECTIVE:  early, cold, bluish-gray, foot, sparkly, dog, blue, windy

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