Thursday, April 25, 2013

Moist, but not necessarily chewy – v2



Asking for details, the story, the truth
the girls in the back seat
the chocolate already consumed
before asking, allowing
more candy to be enjoyed

Two brownies was her answer
asking if they were chewy
Moist was her response
Moist, but not necessarily chewy
to her older sister’s consternation

enjoying a laugh on the way home
after the school’s Valentine’s Day
her answer precise, perfect
something for the memory books


Edited April 24, 2013 and April 25, 2013
“Moist, but not necessarily chewy – v2”
February 12, 2010
“Moist, by not necessarily chewy”
Shanequa and Shyanne
Pembroke Hill School
Suncook, NH


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