Thursday, October 29, 2015

crimson bars – v3

Crimson bars spread
between the rows of white;
Under the stars
our Freedom burns bright

The blood of our heroes
given for us, offered to keep us safe;
Standing watch in the darkness
that we would remain free

The true cost of Freedom
the blood of our youth;
Standing guard, on station,
in the dark places out there

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edited October 29, 2015
crimson bars – v3

(editing original)
January 9, 2012
crimson bars – v2
January 9, 2012
crimson bars
I began writing the title for this poem
at the Poet’s Corner,
our monthly poetry group,
Suncook Senior Center
after hearing again a reading of the poem,
“Barbara Frietchie”
by John Greenleaf Whittier
&
Star Spangled Banner,
based on the poem, “Defence of Fort McHenry”,
written in 1814 by the 35-year-old lawyer
and amateur poet Francis Scott Key
&
New Hampshire Primary, January 10, 2012
&
May 3, 2010
 “Whose Banner Are We Carrying
inspired by the readings at
1st meeting of a poetry group,
at the Suncook Senior Center
Allenstown, NH
including the poem,
“Barbara Frietchie,” a poem from the Civil War era
by the American poet John Greenleaf Whittier
and the video played by the director
by third graders of Tussing Elementary School,
Colonial Heights, Virginia

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