Wednesday, October 28, 2015

the strings of gossamer – v6

She sat with Him
held within her loving arms
the crucified body of Christ
our Messiah, May’s baby boy.

Her gaze given a new focus
ensnared in strings of gossamer
obscuring the body of Christ
in the words of the spider.

Speaking in lines that she drew
painted on the face of the Madonna;
The visage of sadness set off
in the meshed strings of gossamer.

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edited October 28, 2015
the strings of gossamer – v6

(editing original)
renamed/edited September 3, 2015
her strings of gossamer
(editing “the strings of gossamer - v3”)
&
edited July 7, 2015
the strings of gossamer – v5
(editing original)
edited March 28, 2015
a veil of her sorrow – v9
(editing version 4)
edited March 28, 2015
a veil of her sorrow – v8
(editing version 2)
edited March 28, 2015
a veil of her sorrow – v7
(editing version 6, adding one more stanza)
edited January 21, 2015
the strings of gossamer – v4
(editing original again)
edited January 21, 2015
a veil of her sorrow – v6
(editing original again)
edited October 24, 2014
the strings of gossamer – v3
edited October 14, 2014
the strings of gossamer – v2
edited October 14, 2014
a veil of her sorrow – v5
(editing version 4)
edited October 4, 2014
a veil of her sorrow – v4
(editing original again)
edited October 4, 2014
a veil of her sorrow – v3
(editing version 2)
Edited September 8, 2013
a veil of her sorrow – v2
new poem September 8, 2013
a veil of her sorrow
typed September 7, 2013
the strings of gossamer
June 4, 2013
picture by Rakesh Chandode
of “Lamentation of Christ” statue
Prague, Czech Republic
Czechoslovakia
with spider web,
page 11 of January 2012
National Geographic
&
edited/ new name August 4, 2015
holding the body of Jesus
edited/new name August 4, 2015
holding the body of Christ
edited August 4, 2015
the holding of Christ – v2
March 8, 2014
the holding of Christ
&
Cover Art
 “Blue Pieta”
by Leszek Forczek
Cover Art for March April issue
interpretation by Mona Bagasao-Cave
read March 3, 2014
Upper Room Daily Devotional
for March and April 2014

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