Up ahead of
me
To my right,
at about 2 o’clock
Around the
point before me
A burst of
squawks and the
Beating of
heavy wings
Filled my
vision
The head and
then the long endless body
Rose before
me, turning
Right over
The spine of
my canoe
The Great
Blue Heron
Blocking my
vision
No more than
ten feet above
My open jaw
And
transfixed eyes.
It flew
toward me
Thwump,
thwump
I heard the
wings breaking the
Early morning
stillness around me
The majestic
bird, rising,
Cupped its
sails, silently,
And hovered
for a moment,
Or a
lifetime, drawing it to me,
Directly
above my right shoulder
Each feather
was visible -
Rust, cream,
slate,
And light
blue eye shadow.
The feet and
legs stretched behind
Tows, talons,
pointed to cut through the air
My head
rolled backward to watch
The bird fly
off
Across the
lake
A precious gift
to start my day.
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edited
October 29, 2015
ten
feet overhead – v10
(editing
original)
edited
August 21, 2015
Ten
Feet Overhead – v9
(editing
version 6)
edited
December 9, 2014
Ten
Feet Overhead – v8
(editing
version 6)
edited April 3, 2014
Ten Feet (not Twenty) Overhead – v7
(editing
version posted 5/3/2004)
Edited
September 20, 2012
“Ten
Feet Overhead – v6”
editing
the 4th version (the one with Marie Harris input)
&
Edited
September 20, 2012
“Ten
Feet Overhead – v5”
(editing
the 3rd version)
inspired by
reading it at Poets’ Corner
monthly poetry
reading,
at the Suncook
Senior Center
September 10,
2012
&
Saved as separate file and reposted
September 20, 2012
published version – 2/7/2004
“Ten Feet
Overhead – v4”
Written June 18, 2001, edits June 21 and June 22, 2001, based
on input from NH Poet Laureate, Marie Harris.
&
The evolution
of the poem - Ten Feet Overhead”
The three drafts below represent the evolution of a poem,
"Ten Feet Overhead", based on a morning on Swains Lake in Barrington,
NH in 2001, reading down from 1st draft to a second version, finally to the
published version, posted here on 2/7/04.
&
“Ten Feet
Overhead – v3”
June 21, 2001
“Ten Feet
Overhead – v2”
June 22, 2001
“Ten Feet
Overhead – v1”
June 18, 2001
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