Wednesday, June 10, 2015

Errant Planet – v5

We are perched,
walking on the edge
of an errant planet;
Off-kilter and dizzy
spinning like a top
wobbling off course
in its orbit, distracted;
Straying from the straight and narrow
the true path, as God intended.

Following baser needs
and primal urges;
Shielding eyes from the glare
the stark light exposing
the echo of memory.
The Word made flesh
the last truth
denied then too;
Christ put to death.

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edited June 10, 2015
Errant Planet – v5

(editing version 3)
edited September 1, 2014
Errant Planet – v4
(editing version 2)
edited September 1, 2014
Errant Planet – v3
(editing original again)
Edited November 17, 2013
Errant Planet – v2
4/27/06 8:50pm
Errant Planet
title drafted 3/15/05 during Disciple I class
&
starting Disciple 1 bible study
September 2, 2004
the first time I had read the bible
as an adult, or really at all…

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