Ice more than Frost – v5

ice more than frost

on the flat surfaces;

flat and slanted

even the doorway

all covered, frozen,

temperature still falling;

well below freezing

that dark, dark night

melting only by applying

the exhaust of the engine;

the car awakening slowly

from its mask of ice

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edited July 18, 2015

Ice more than Frost – v5

(editing version 4)

edited April 10, 2015

Ice more than Frost – v4

http://raymondafoss.blogspot.com/2015/04/ice-more-than-frost-v4.html

(editing original again)

about a different night with black ice

&

edited October 27, 2014

Ice more than Frost – v3

http://raymondafoss.blogspot.com/2014/10/ice-more-than-frost-v3.html

(editing original again)

edited February 12, 2014

“Ice more than Frost – v2”

http://raymondafoss.blogspot.com/2014/02/more-to-dream-v9.html

new poem October 23, 2013

“Ice more than Frost”

http://raymondafoss.blogspot.com/2013/10/ice-more-than-frost.html

driving from Patten to Stacyville and

view of Mt. Katahdin

October 23, 2013

edited April 8, 2015

painted with grains of sand – v7

http://raymondafoss.blogspot.com/2015/04/painted-with-grains-of-sand-v7.html

(editing version 3)

Edited September 17, 2013

painted with grains of sand – v6

http://raymondafoss.blogspot.com/2013/09/painted-with-grains-of-sand-v6.html

(editing version 3)

Edited December 15, 2012

“painted with grains of sand – v5”

http://raymondafoss.blogspot.com/2012/12/painted-with-grains-of-sand-v5.html

reediting version 3

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Edited December 11, 2012

“painted with grains of sand – v4”

http://raymondafoss.blogspot.com/2012/12/painted-with-grains-of-sand-v4.html

based on suggestions by Jacob Montgomery,

of Bournemouth, England

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Edited December 10, 2012

“painted with grains of sand – v3”

http://raymondafoss.blogspot.com/2012/12/painted-with-grains-of-sand-v3.html

after emailing earlier version to Jacob Montgomery,

Bournemouth, England

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Edited December 10, 2012

“painted with grains of sand – v2”

http://raymondafoss.blogspot.com/2012/12/painted-with-grains-of-sand-v2.html

November 20, 2012

“painted with grains of sand”

http://raymondafoss.blogspot.com/2012/11/painted-with-grains-of-sand.html

one of several poems about drive yesterday

http://raymondafoss.blogspot.com/search/label/Epsom

the fields were alive with frost this morning

on NH Route 107 in Epsom, NH, Southbound,

with many vistas of white over the reeds and grain stalks, as

at 43.213132,-71.285279

going to the Deerfield Community School

November 19, 2012

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