Wednesday, February 18, 2015

my lungs filled with the smoke – v2

sorrow each season
beginning in ashes;
the palms of Sunday burned
my lungs filled with the smoke;
the sweetness of Sunday
a memory, shattered.

the spell of palms,
of the joy, hosannas,
broken, burst
the dust of the earth;
the ashes all that remains
of our cries to the King.

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edited February 18, 2015
my lungs filled with the smoke – v2

March 6, 2014
my lungs filled with the smoke
&
edited February 18, 2015
the sorrow of the ashes – v3
(editing version 1)
edited March 15, 2014
the sorrow of the ashes – v2
March 6, 2014
the sorrow of the ashes
&
edited February 18, 2015
the palms consumed – v2
March 6, 2014
the palms consumed
&
edited February 18, 2015
burning our celebration – v3
(editing original)
edited March 10, 2014
burning our celebration – v2
March 6, 2014
burning our celebration
&
edited February 18, 2015
burning our hope – v3
(editing version 1)
edited April 12, 2014
burning our hope – v2
March 5, 2014
burning our hope
&
edited February 18, 2015
cloaked in the smoke – v2
March 5, 2014
cloaked in the smoke
&
edited February 18, 2015
ashes of that fire – v2
March 5, 2014
ashes of that fire
&
edited February 18, 2015
How quickly they burn – v2
March 5, 2014
How quickly they burn
&
edited/new name February 18, 2015
the mirror of the ashes
edited February 18, 2015
the truth of the ashes – v2
March 5, 2014
the truth of the ashes
&
edited February 18, 2015
the dust of the ashes – v3
(editing version 1 again)
edited March 10, 2014
the dust the ashes – v2
March 5, 2014
the dust the ashes
&
edited February 18, 2015
the anger of the fire – v5
(editing original again)
edited March 30, 2014
the anger of the fire – v4
edited March 24, 2014
the anger of the fire – v3
edited March 15, 2014
the anger of the fire – v2
March 5, 2014
the anger of the fire
&
edited February 18, 2015
bittersweet – v2
March 5, 2014
bittersweet
&
Isaiah 58:5-10
Burning of the Palm service
by Pastor Ruth Foss
sermon blog
meditation blog
“God’s Whisper” blog
Stetson Memorial United Methodist Church
February 17, 2015 and February 18, 2015
&
burning last year’s palms
hymn, “Sunday’s Palms Are Wednesday’s Ashes” TFWS #2138
&
Worship Theme – “Ash Wednesday
Prelude
Unison Prayer
Matthew 6:1-6, 16-21 (CEB)
Joel 2:12-17a (CEB)
Prayer of Confession
Words of Assurance
Imposition of Ashes
Communion liturgy – “The Great Thanksgiving for Early Lent”
Lenten poem:”Changer: A Lenten Poem”
by Adrienne Sparrow Trevathan
my earlier poem, “within the sweetness of the smoke”
by Pastor Ruth Foss
Stetson Memorial United Methodist Church
Patten, ME
March 5, 2014
Ash Wednesday
Lent

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