Thursday, October 29, 2015

Pumpkin Seeds – v2

Under the canopy
over the lake
on the flat surface
of the pier, under the awning
next to the boat moored there

I lay still on the pier
watching the water below me
fish, pumpkin seeds,
darted fitfully beneath me
aware of my presence

A fishing leader only
dangling off my index finger
a hook hidden from their view;
A less-than-cautious one was
caught with canned corn on my line

Dropped in the bucket beside me
flopping and flipping
while I did it again
in the clear lake
in Mound, Minnesota
forty-four summers ago





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edited October 29, 2015
Pumpkin Seeds – v2
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post
“Darting fitfully”
How could I not post this poem with this photo ... it did an odd thing, Mr Foss saw tiny fish in the water like pumpkin seeds and, because of it, I see the seeds in the pumpkin like little fish within the reeds.... the power of suggestion! 
by
Lynn Morag
January 27, 2007
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August 17, 2006 22:07
Pumpkin Seeds
Lake Minnetonka
Mound, MN
August 1971

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