Jostling with the crowd to find a place,
on the edge of my seat, yearning, straining,
craning to see everything, listening intently,
sitting as close to the action as I could, urgent...
There were so many people crushed together
sensing strange perfumes of distant lands,
a mixing of languages I had never heard,
hearing every word of the debate,
dripping, bleeding into my spirit,
hanging on every distraction,
murmuring, arguing, trouble,
who Jesus was truly –
the Prophet, a heretic, the Messiah...
smells of sweat, of foreign foods,
the Temple alive, surging,
from early morning, past sunset,
for days on end...
Suddenly, the chaos was pierced -
Jesus, standing up, crying out,
Offering us all living water,
Declaring his identity, yet patient...
Urging us to believe...
I didn’t know what to expect, though I was expectant,
I had seen this Jesus yesterday,
I had heard his Galilean accent,
I saw him outside in the throng throbbing around him
the crush of so many strangers
I sensed there was something special
But I didn’t know it was him...
the one that the Pharisees were seeking,
the one causing trouble, healing,
not following the Law of the Sabbath...
How he had taught in the Temple,
How he had upended the tables...
How I longed to draw nearer,
to gather every morsel they were speaking
A murmur of rebellion, a hope;
but a cadence of objection, a curse of rejection...
I wanted to understand his message about water
But I did not dare to approach, to be seen...
I saw the guards, the Pharisees,
Their backs stiffened, on alert
to see the crowd's reactions,
wondering what would come next...
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Edited February 27, 2026
the babble of their words – v2
Based on #John7
Jesus Goes to the Festival of Tabernacles (Booths)
Jesus Teaches at the Festival
Division Over Who Jesus Is
Unbelief of the Jewish Leaders
Based on #John2:13-17
John 5:1-18
John 18:18
Genesis 11:7-9
Acts 2:4-11
Men’s Thursday Night Bible Study
North Hills Church
Edited February 27, 2026
by that same measure – v2
https://raymondafoss.blogspot.com/2026/02/by-that-same-measure-v2.html
Edited February 13, 2026
a living testimony – v2
https://raymondafoss.blogspot.com/2026/02/a-living-testimony-v2.html
Men’s Thursday Evening Bible Study
Edited January 24, 2026
Bring Your whip, Lord
https://raymondafoss.blogspot.com/2026/01/bring-your-whip-lord.html
Men’s Thursday Morning Bible Study
January 15, 2026
I have seen the Christ
https://raymondafoss.blogspot.com/2026/01/i-have-seen-christ.html
Men’s Thursday Morning Bible Study
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Poetry Where You Live.
on the edge of my seat, yearning, straining,
craning to see everything, listening intently,
sitting as close to the action as I could, urgent...
There were so many people crushed together
sensing strange perfumes of distant lands,
a mixing of languages I had never heard,
hearing every word of the debate,
dripping, bleeding into my spirit,
hanging on every distraction,
murmuring, arguing, trouble,
who Jesus was truly –
the Prophet, a heretic, the Messiah...
smells of sweat, of foreign foods,
the Temple alive, surging,
from early morning, past sunset,
for days on end...
Suddenly, the chaos was pierced -
Jesus, standing up, crying out,
Offering us all living water,
Declaring his identity, yet patient...
Urging us to believe...
I had seen this Jesus yesterday,
I had heard his Galilean accent,
I saw him outside in the throng throbbing around him
the crush of so many strangers
I sensed there was something special
But I didn’t know it was him...
the one that the Pharisees were seeking,
the one causing trouble, healing,
not following the Law of the Sabbath...
How he had taught in the Temple,
How he had upended the tables...
How I longed to draw nearer,
to gather every morsel they were speaking
A murmur of rebellion, a hope;
but a cadence of objection, a curse of rejection...
I wanted to understand his message about water
But I did not dare to approach, to be seen...
I saw the guards, the Pharisees,
Their backs stiffened, on alert
to see the crowd's reactions,
wondering what would come next...
Edited February 27, 2026
the babble of their words – v2
Jesus Goes to the Festival of Tabernacles (Booths)
Jesus Teaches at the Festival
Division Over Who Jesus Is
Unbelief of the Jewish Leaders
Based on #John2:13-17
John 5:1-18
John 18:18
Genesis 11:7-9
Acts 2:4-11
Men’s Thursday Night Bible Study
North Hills Church
Edited February 27, 2026
by that same measure – v2
https://raymondafoss.blogspot.com/2026/02/by-that-same-measure-v2.html
Edited February 13, 2026
a living testimony – v2
https://raymondafoss.blogspot.com/2026/02/a-living-testimony-v2.html
Men’s Thursday Evening Bible Study
Edited January 24, 2026
Bring Your whip, Lord
https://raymondafoss.blogspot.com/2026/01/bring-your-whip-lord.html
Men’s Thursday Morning Bible Study
January 15, 2026
I have seen the Christ
https://raymondafoss.blogspot.com/2026/01/i-have-seen-christ.html
Men’s Thursday Morning Bible Study
Poetry Where You Live.
Poetry, God, Christ, Spirit, John 7, Festival of Tabernacles, Festival of Booths, Pentecost, Babel, babble, Messiah, identity, Temple, confusion, living water,
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