Rewriting

Wanting
Seeing the beauty
The precision
Magic in prose
Cut and paste
Letting go of the old
Pulling edits in and chaff out
Not a criticism of me
Working to fix
Creating new
Losing voice
Gaining strength
Struggle for balance
New eyes needed still
Structure and time
Dig into it
Next time better

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edited January 3, 2016

Rewriting – v3

http://raymondafoss.blogspot.com/2016/01/rewriting-v3.html

(editing original)

edited July 11, 2014

Rewriting – v2

http://raymondafoss.blogspot.com/2014/07/rewriting-v2.html

September 28, 2001 05:33

Rewriting

http://raymondafoss.blogspot.com/2004/03/rewriting.html

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