Showing posts with label rhythm. Show all posts
Showing posts with label rhythm. Show all posts

Friday, October 13, 2023

Plum sky at night - v2

Plum sky at night
nothing so simple, rhyming,
fog to start the day, thick,
now radiant gray-white
a milk-wash over the sky, the dome,
gaining power, bright.
 
Finally, past midday blue sky appearing,
but only for a time, milk-sky returning,
whiter, brighter, making my eyes squint;
sunset now upon us, the cycle,
whisps of clouds lower pinker,
another day ending, darkness come.



 
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Edited October 13, 2023
Plum sky at night – v2
https://raymondafoss.blogspot.com/2023/10/plum-sky-at-night-v2.html
October 13, 2023
Plum sky at night
https://raymondafoss.blogspot.com/2023/10/plum-sky-at-night.html
 
All of my poems, photographs, and videos are copyrighted by Raymond A. Foss, 1999, 2000, 2001, 2002, 2003, 2004, 2005, 2006, 2007, 2008, 2009, 2010, 2011, 2012, 2013, 2014, 2015, 2016, 2017, 2018, 2019, 2020, 2021, 2022, and 2023. All rights are reserved. Contact me at Ray Foss (raymondafoss@gmail.com)  for usage. See all 53,000+ of my poems at www.raymondafoss.blogspot.com Poetry Where You Live.
 
Nature, sky, sunset, sunrise, poetry, rhyme, rhythm, peace, writing poetry,
 
#poetry #nature #sky #sunset #sunrise #rhyme #rhythm #peace #writingpoetry

Plum sky at night

Plum sky at night
nothing so simple, rhyming,
fog to start the day, thick,
now radiant gray-white,
a milk-wash over the sky, the dome,
gaining power, bright.
 
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Edited October 13, 2023
Plum sky at night – v2
https://raymondafoss.blogspot.com/2023/10/plum-sky-at-night-v2.html
October 13, 2023
Plum sky at night
https://raymondafoss.blogspot.com/2023/10/plum-sky-at-night.html
 
All of my poems, photographs, and videos are copyrighted by Raymond A. Foss, 1999, 2000, 2001, 2002, 2003, 2004, 2005, 2006, 2007, 2008, 2009, 2010, 2011, 2012, 2013, 2014, 2015, 2016, 2017, 2018, 2019, 2020, 2021, 2022, and 2023. All rights are reserved. Contact me at Ray Foss (raymondafoss@gmail.com)  for usage. See all 53,000+ of my poems at www.raymondafoss.blogspot.com Poetry Where You Live.
 
Nature, sky, sunset, sunrise, poetry, rhyme, rhythm,
 
#poetry #nature #sky #sunset #sunrise #rhyme #rhythm 





Thursday, January 07, 2016

Personal Poetry – v2

A proper noun –
Personal Poetry –
Quick encapsulation,
State of hesitance;
Moving forward
In spite of myself
Words from the ether
From the whisper of God.

Slices of me
Flesh and nerve
Risk of rejection
Laid open, raw;
Vulnerable, exposed,
With each utterance
Each sharing,
Each telling.

Perfect prose
Escapes me.
But they are me
Each one and each word;
Now, as I write
Untested and Exposed to
Animus, ridicule
Their misunderstanding.

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November 3, 2017
the cadence of the words
&
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edited January 13, 2016
A Calling to Write – v4
(editing version 3)
edited November 4, 2015
A Calling to Write – v3
(editing version 2)
July 6, 2015
A Calling to Write – v2
August 30, 2011
Hearing Your Words
written after looking up the earlier poem,
“A Calling to Write”
February 4, 2010
A Calling to Write
Habakkuk 2:2
Habakkuk 1
Habakkuk 2:1-3
and Day 138, “Write the Revelation”, in
 “Daily Mediations: On Golden Texts of the Bible”,
by Henry Gariepy
read 2/4/10
&
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edited January 13, 2016
Inspiration Poetry – v6
(merging edits to version 3, version 4, and version 5)
(I know, this is part of the craft thing…)
edited  November 17, 2015
Inspiration Poetry – v5
(editing version 3)
edited  November 5, 2015
Inspiration Poetry – v4
(editing version 3)
edited November 4, 2015
Inspiration Poetry – v3
(merging version 2 and original)
Edited September 4, 2012
“Inspiration Poetry – v2”
May 24, 2009
“Inspiration Poetry”
&
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merged / edited January 9, 2016
Seeing the Words – v29
(merging edits to version 28, version 15, version 16, version 17,
version 18, version 19, version 20, version 21 version 22, version 23,
version 24, version 25, version 26, and version 27)
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edits of individual poems
edited January 9, 2016
Seeing the Words – v28
(editing version 14)
edited January 9, 2016
Seeing the Words – v27
(editing version 13)
edited January 9, 2016
Seeing the Words – v26
(editing version 12)
edited January 9, 2016
Seeing the Words – v25
(editing version 10)
edited January 9, 2016
Seeing the Words – v24
(editing version 9)
edited January 9, 2016
Seeing the Words – v23
(editing version 8)
edited January 9, 2016
Seeing the Words – v22
(editing version 7)
edited January 9, 2016
Seeing the Words – v21
(editing version 6)
edited January 9, 2016
Seeing the Words – v20
(editing version 5)
edited January 9, 2016
Seeing the Words – v19
(editing version 4)
edited January 9, 2016
Seeing the Words – v18
(editing version 3)
edited January 9, 2016
seeing the words – v17
(editing version 2)
edited January 9, 2016
Seeing the Words – v16
(editing original)
edited January 9, 2016
Seeing the Words – v15
(editing version 11)
edited April 10, 2015
seeing the words – v14
(editing version 10)
edited January 31, 2015
seeing the words – v13
(editing original)
edited January 31, 2015
Seeing the Words – v12
(editing original and version 11)
edited May 28, 2014
“Seeing the Words – v11
edited February 15, 2014
“seeing the words – v10”
(editing version 4)
Edited October 26, 2013
“seeing the words – v9”
(editing version 7)
Edited October 25, 2013
“seeing the words – v8”
(editing version 3 again)
Edited October 23, 2013
“seeing the words – v7”
(editing version 3)
Edited October 19, 2013
“seeing the words – v6”
(editing version 3)
Edited October 12, 2013
“seeing the words – v5”
(editing version 4)
Edited October 11, 2013
“seeing the words – v4”
(editing version 3)
Edited October 5, 2013
“seeing the words – v3”
(editing the original again)
Edited July 22, 2013
“seeing the words – v2”
December 4, 2007 12:25pm
“seeing the words”
about writing poetry, when it is a gift of God,
transcribing the words God already wrote
&
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edited January 7, 2016
Personal Poetry – v2
posted February 21, 2004
February 3, 2004 16:45
Personal Poetry
&


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edited December 17, 2015
Poetry – revised – v2
posting 2/5/2004 – 1st posting to blog
last edit 8/13/2000
edit 5/24/2000
Poetry – revised

All of my poems, photographs, and videos are copyrighted by Raymond A. Foss, 2000, 2001, 2002, 2003, 2004, 2005, 2006, 2007, 2008, 2009, 2010, 2011, 2012, 2013, 2014, 2015, 2016, and 2017. All rights are reserved. Contact me at Ray Foss (raymondafoss@gmail.com) for usage. See all 45,330 of my poems at www.raymondafoss.blogspot.com Poetry Where You Live.

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Sunday, February 16, 2014

A Harsh Self-Image – v6

What do we see
looking in our mirrors
are we really honest
do we look, do we see
tracks of our lives
written in the flesh
scars of our past
What do we really see
when we are in private
A harsh self-image
worn down by struggles
words spoken by others
society’s message
to be thinner, younger
to wear a mask, be different
not being authentic, honest,
The beauty inside
not seen under the layers
hidden even from ourselves


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edited February 16, 2014
“A Harsh Self-Image – v6”
(editing version 2)
Edited October 22, 2013
“A Harsh Self-Image – v5”
Edited October 13, 2013
“A Harsh Self-Image – v4”
(editing original again)
Edited October 13, 2013
“A Harsh Self-Image – v3”
Edited April 20, 2013
“A Harsh Self-Image – v2”
April 20, 2013
“A Harsh Self-Image”
Dove ad about self-image
my response to the Dove ad on Blogger
my response to the Dove ad on Twitter
April 20, 2013
&
new poem April 18, 2013
“The path of our lives”
Edited April 15, 2013
“Like whispers on the rice paper – v4”
Edited August 15, 2012
“Like whispers on the rice paper – v3”
February 17, 2012
“Like whispers on the rice paper – v2”
lWednesday evening worship
Fourth of series on prayer,
inspired by Marcia McFee,
“All My Days: A Summer of Prayer”,
Third Sunday: Stepping Stones
and meditation
by Pastor Ruth Foss
sermon blog
meditation blog
Suncook United Methodist Church
Suncook, NH
February 15, 2012
&
Wednesday evening worship
Third of series on prayer,
inspired by Marcia McFee,
“All My Days: A Summer of Prayer”,
Third Sunday: Silence
and meditation
by Pastor Ruth Foss
Suncook United Methodist Church
Suncook, NH
February 8, 2012
&
Wednesday evening worship
Second of series on prayer,
inspired by Marcia McFee,
“All My Days: A Summer of Prayer”,
Second Sunday: Bumpy Bead
1 John 4:7-21
and meditation
by Pastor Ruth Foss
Suncook United Methodist Church
Suncook, NH
January 25, 2012
&
Wednesday evening worship
start of series on prayer,
inspired by Marcia McFee,
“All My Days: A Summer of Prayer”,
First Sunday: God
Psalm 105:1-6
Isaiah 56:1-8
Acts 17:22-32
poem, “Pied Beauty”,
by Gerard Manley Hopkins
and meditation
by Pastor Ruth Foss
Suncook United Methodist Church
Suncook, NH
January 11, 2012

All of my poems are copyrighted by Raymond A. Foss, 2000, 2001, 2002, 2003, 2004, 2005, 2006, 2007, 2008, 2009, 2010, 2011, 2012, 2013, 2014. All rights reserved. Contact me at Ray Foss for usage. See all 27,890+ of my poems at www.raymondafoss.blogspot.com Poetry Where You Live.


Sunday, December 22, 2013

What do they see – v6

Words of this message
hidden struggles, but hope,
their beauty inside
but a harsh self-image
slow, hard to set aside
with society’s message

What do they see, really
my daughters, my lover
my wife, these sisters,
the women in my life
when they look in the mirror?

Do they see their real beauty
life in the wrinkles,
in the crinkles, the dimples
the lines of their faces
theirs to share, open
joyfully, confident

Do they smile for the mirror
are they happy in their skin
open, honestly
do they see the beauty
that is there deep within?


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Edited December 22, 2013
“What do they see – v6”
(editing version 3)
Edited November 6, 2013
“What do they see – v5”
edited October 23, 2013
“What do they see – v4”
edited October 13, 2013
“What do they see – v3”
edited April 20, 2013
“What do they see – v2”
new poem April 20, 2013
“What do they see”
Edited April 20, 2013
“A Harsh Self-Image – v2”
April 20, 2013
“A Harsh Self-Image”
Dove ad about self-image
additional videos by the participants:
artist Gil Zamora
Kela
Florence
Melinda
my response to the Dove ad on Blogger
my response to the Dove ad on Twitter
April 20, 2013
&
new poem April 18, 2013
“The path of our lives”
Edited April 15, 2013
“Like whispers on the rice paper – v4”
Edited August 15, 2012
“Like whispers on the rice paper – v3”
February 17, 2012
“Like whispers on the rice paper – v2”
lWednesday evening worship
Fourth of series on prayer,
inspired by Marcia McFee,
“All My Days: A Summer of Prayer”,
Third Sunday: Stepping Stones
and meditation
by Pastor Ruth Foss
sermon blog
meditation blog
Suncook United Methodist Church
Suncook, NH
February 15, 2012
&
Wednesday evening worship
Third of series on prayer,
inspired by Marcia McFee,
“All My Days: A Summer of Prayer”,
Third Sunday: Silence
and meditation
by Pastor Ruth Foss
Suncook United Methodist Church
Suncook, NH
February 8, 2012
&
Wednesday evening worship
Second of series on prayer,
inspired by Marcia McFee,
“All My Days: A Summer of Prayer”,
Second Sunday: Bumpy Bead
1 John 4:7-21
and meditation
by Pastor Ruth Foss
Suncook United Methodist Church
Suncook, NH
January 25, 2012
&
Wednesday evening worship
start of series on prayer,
inspired by Marcia McFee,
“All My Days: A Summer of Prayer”,
First Sunday: God
Psalm 105:1-6
Isaiah 56:1-8
Acts 17:22-32
poem, “Pied Beauty”,
by Gerard Manley Hopkins
and meditation
by Pastor Ruth Foss
Suncook United Methodist Church
Suncook, NH
January 11, 2012


All of my poems are copyrighted by Raymond A. Foss, 2000, 2001, 2002, 2003, 2004, 2005, 2006, 2007, 2008, 2009, 2010, 2011, 2012, 2013, 2014. All rights reserved. Contact me at Ray Foss for usage. See all 28,070+ of my poems at www.raymondafoss.blogspot.com Poetry Where You Live.

Thursday, November 07, 2013

What do they see – v5


words of the message
hidden struggles, but hope,
their beauty within
but a harsh self-image
slow, hard to set aside
with society’s message

What do they see, really
my daughters, my lover
the women in my life
what do they truly see
when they look in the mirror?

Do they see their real beauty
life in the wrinkles,
in the crinkles, the dimples
the lines of their faces
theirs to share, open
joyfully, confident

Do they smile for the mirror
do they like who they see
are they happy in their skin
do they see the beauty
that is there deep within?


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Edited November 6, 2013
“What do they see – v5”
edited October 23, 2013
“What do they see – v4”
edited October 13, 2013
“What do they see – v3”
edited April 20, 2013
“What do they see – v2”
new poem April 20, 2013
“What do they see”
Edited April 20, 2013
“A Harsh Self-Image – v2”
April 20, 2013
“A Harsh Self-Image”
Dove ad about self-image
additional videos by the participants:
artist Gil Zamora
Kela
Florence
Melinda
my response to the Dove ad on Blogger
my response to the Dove ad on Twitter
April 20, 2013
&
new poem April 18, 2013
“The path of our lives”
Edited April 15, 2013
“Like whispers on the rice paper – v4”
Edited August 15, 2012
“Like whispers on the rice paper – v3”
February 17, 2012
“Like whispers on the rice paper – v2”
lWednesday evening worship
Fourth of series on prayer,
inspired by Marcia McFee,
“All My Days: A Summer of Prayer”,
Third Sunday: Stepping Stones
and meditation
by Pastor Ruth Foss
sermon blog
meditation blog
Suncook United Methodist Church
Suncook, NH
February 15, 2012
&
Wednesday evening worship
Third of series on prayer,
inspired by Marcia McFee,
“All My Days: A Summer of Prayer”,
Third Sunday: Silence
and meditation
by Pastor Ruth Foss
sermon blog
meditation blog
Suncook United Methodist Church
Suncook, NH
February 8, 2012
&
Wednesday evening worship
Second of series on prayer,
inspired by Marcia McFee,
“All My Days: A Summer of Prayer”,
Second Sunday: Bumpy Bead
1 John 4:7-21
and meditation
by Pastor Ruth Foss
sermon blog
meditation blog
Suncook United Methodist Church
Suncook, NH
January 25, 2012
&
Wednesday evening worship
start of series on prayer,
inspired by Marcia McFee,
“All My Days: A Summer of Prayer”,
First Sunday: God
Psalm 105:1-6
Isaiah 56:1-8
Acts 17:22-32
poem, “Pied Beauty”,
by Gerard Manley Hopkins
and meditation
by Pastor Ruth Foss
sermon blog
meditation blog
Suncook United Methodist Church
Suncook, NH
January 11, 2012

All of my poems are copyrighted by Raymond A. Foss, 2000, 2001, 2002, 2003, 2004, 2005, 2006, 2007, 2008, 2009, 2010, 2011, 2012, 2013. All rights reserved. Contact me at Ray Foss for usage. See all 26,120+ of my poems at www.raymondafoss.blogspot.com Poetry Where You Live.