Friday, July 24, 2009

The Stealth of Her Design

In the early morning dewlight
the stealth of her design
the intricate lattice
revealed. Ribbons
concentric ovals
rays, lines radiating outward
all of her artistry
on a fleeting display
before the warming
bleeding away of the fog
dewdrops into vapor
Her trap, her net
hidden once more
just beyond
our bathroom window

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edited December 10, 2015
The Stealth of Her Design – v7
(merging edits to version 4 and version 6)
edited August 6, 2015
The Stealth of Her Design – v6
(editing version 5)
edited December 22, 2014
The Stealth of Her Design – v5
(editing version 3)
edited December 11, 2014
The Stealth of Her Design – v4
(editing version 3)
Edited October 15, 2013
“The Stealth of Her Design – v3”
(editing original again)
Edited August 16, 2013
“The Stealth of Her Design – v2”
July 24, 2009
“The Stealth of Her Design”
about July 23, 2009
Suncook, NH


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