Up
ahead, to my right around the point;
Burst
of squawks / beating of heavy wings
Erupted,
filling the still air.
Head
and then its long endless body
Rose
right over the spine of my canoe
Heron
blocking my vision, my view...
No
more than ten feet above my transfixed eyes.
The
Great Blue Heron flew toward me
Thwump,
thwump …
In
my spirit, my prayer, my attentiveness,
I
heard the wings pushing, breaking
early-morning-stillness
around me.
The
bird cupped its sails
And
hovered but for a moment,
Or
a lifetime, it seemed.
Each
feather of its wings were visible -
Shades
of rust, cream, slate,
Light
blue eye shadow.
I
watched, motionless, silently;
The
bird flew off, majestically, royalty,
Alone,
across my lake.
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edited February 20, 2022
Ten Feet Overhead – v13
https://raymondafoss.blogspot.com/2022/02/ten-feet-overhead-v13.html
edited February 20, 2022
Ten Feet Overhead – v12
https://raymondafoss.blogspot.com/2022/02/ten-feet-overhead-v12.html
edited
September 28, 2017
ten
feet overhead – v11
http://raymondafoss.blogspot.com/2017/09/ten-feet-overhead-v11.html
(editing
version 2)
edited
October 29, 2015
ten
feet overhead – v10
http://raymondafoss.blogspot.com/2015/10/ten-feet-not-twenty-overhead-v10.html
(editing
original)
edited
August 21, 2015
Ten
Feet Overhead – v9
http://raymondafoss.blogspot.com/2015/08/ten-feet-overhead-v9.html
(editing
version 6)
edited
December 9, 2014
Ten
Feet Overhead – v8
http://raymondafoss.blogspot.com/2014/12/ten-feet-overhead-v8.html
(editing
version 6)
edited
April 3, 2014
Ten
Feet (not Twenty) Overhead – v7
http://raymondafoss.blogspot.com/2014/04/ten-feet-not-twenty-overhead-v7.html
(editing
version posted 5/3/2004)
Edited
September 20, 2012
Ten
Feet Overhead – v6
http://raymondafoss.blogspot.com/2012/09/ten-feet-overhead-v6.html
editing
the 4th version (the one with Marie Harris input)
&
Edited
September 20, 2012
Ten
Feet Overhead – v5
http://raymondafoss.blogspot.com/2012/09/ten-feet-not-twenty-overhead-v5.html
(editing
the 3rd version)
inspired by
reading it at Poets’ Corner
monthly poetry
reading,
at the Suncook
Senior Center
September 10,
2012
&
Saved as separate file and reposted
September 20, 2012
published version – 2/7/2004
Ten Feet
Overhead – v4
http://raymondafoss.blogspot.com/2004/02/one-morning-on-swains-lake.html
Written June 18, 2001, edits June 21 and June 22, 2001, based
on input from NH Poet Laureate, Marie Harris.
&
The evolution
of the poem - Ten Feet Overhead
http://raymondafoss.blogspot.com/2004/05/evolution-of-poem-ten-feet-overhead.html
The three drafts below represent the evolution of a poem,
"Ten Feet Overhead", based on a morning on Swains Lake in Barrington,
NH in 2001, reading down from 1st draft to a second version, finally to the
published version, posted here on 2/7/04.
&
Ten Feet
Overhead – v3
June 21, 2001
http://raymondafoss.blogspot.com/2004/05/ten-feet-overhead-final-version.html
Ten Feet
Overhead – v2
June 22, 2001
http://raymondafoss.blogspot.com/2004/05/ten-feet-not-twenty-overhead-second.html
Ten Feet
Overhead – v1
June 18, 2001
http://raymondafoss.blogspot.com/2004/05/ten-feet-not-twenty-overhead-first.html
summer of 2000
Swain’s Lake
Barrington, NH
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