A hiss, a sizzle over the sand,
each wave breathing a whisper,
a touching of the sea upon the land,
a promise in the conversation…
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March 22, 2024
A hiss, a sizzle
over the sand – v1
Edited March 22,
2024
Focusing on one
wave – v4
https://raymondafoss.blogspot.com/2024/03/focusing-on-one-wave-v4.html
Edited
March 22, 2024
Almost
silent over the sand – v8
https://raymondafoss.blogspot.com/2024/03/almost-silent-over-sand-v8.html
Edited
August 21, 2023
Almost
silent over the sand – v7
https://raymondafoss.blogspot.com/2023/08/almost-silent-over-sand-v7.html
(getting
rid of the dying imagery)
Edited August 21,
2023
Focusing on one
wave – v3
https://raymondafoss.blogspot.com/2023/08/focusing-on-one-wave-v3.html
Edited August 16,
2023
Focusing on one
wave – v2
https://raymondafoss.blogspot.com/2023/08/focusing-on-one-wave-v2.html
Drafted August
14, 2023
after comments by
Jolan Gamblin
(still not sure
about stanza 1)
Merged July 24, 2023
Almost silent over the sand – v6
https://raymondafoss.blogspot.com/2023/07/almost-silent-over-sand-v6.html
July 24, 2023
Focusing on one wave
https://raymondafoss.blogspot.com/2023/07/focusing-on-one-wave.html
https://www.facebook.com/792593002/videos/630421232183869/
Edited July 24,
2023
Almost silent
over the sand – v5
https://raymondafoss.blogspot.com/2023/07/almost-silent-over-sand-v5.html
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beach, sand, writers lift, spirit, light, water, wind, earth, fire, air, sky,
wood, metal, elements, St. Augustine, St. Augustine Beach,
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