Sounds of Scribbles – v4

Jots of thoughts in my journal,
Seeing some words crossed out,
Others inserted, added,
How does editing sound, frenetic;
Illegible words, random thoughts,
Scratching out the rhyme,
Fighting the meter…
 
Lines through the jetsam,
The flotsam of thought,
Like word balloons,
Words of motion, precision,
Snapping to attention,
Coming into being,
On the printed page…
 
Erasures like sandpaper.
Maybe a planer, deeper,
Milling raw oak into boards;
Fighting the knots in my prose,
Seeking to capture a moment,
Conjure an image, gossamer,
On the written page…
 
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Edited April 4, 2024
Sounds of Scribbles – v4
 
Edited April 4, 2024
cadence of the words – v3
https://raymondafoss.blogspot.com/2024/04/cadence-of-words-v3.html
Edited April 4, 2024
Flash of Joy – v6
https://raymondafoss.blogspot.com/2024/04/flash-of-joy-v6.html
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edited January 13, 2016
A Calling to Write – v4
http://raymondafoss.blogspot.com/2016/01/a-calling-to-write-v4.html
edited January 13, 2016
Inspiration Poetry – v6
http://raymondafoss.blogspot.com/2016/01/inspiration-poetry-v6.html
merged / edited January 9, 2016
Seeing the Words – v29
http://raymondafoss.blogspot.com/2016/01/seeing-words-v29.html
edited January 7, 2016
Personal Poetry – v2
http://raymondafoss.blogspot.com/2016/01/personal-poetry-v2.html 
edited January 3, 2016
Rewriting – v3
http://raymondafoss.blogspot.com/2016/01/rewriting-v3.html 
edited December 17, 2015
Poetry – revised – v2
http://raymondafoss.blogspot.com/2015/12/poetry-revised-v2.html
posting 2/5/2004 – 1^st posting to blog
Poetry – revised
http://raymondafoss.blogspot.com/2004/02/first-poem-about-what-poetry-is-for-me.html
edited June 29, 2015
Nouns Verbs and Adjectives – v5
http://raymondafoss.blogspot.com/2015/06/nouns-verbs-and-adjectives-v3.html
edited May 19, 2015
Poetry – haiku – 2 – v2
http://raymondafoss.blogspot.com/2015/05/poetry-haiku-2-v2.html
edited March 23, 2015
Sounds of Scribbles – v3
http://raymondafoss.blogspot.com/2015/03/sounds-of-scribbles-v3.html 
September 24, 2006 16:39
A Year in Words
http://raymondafoss.blogspot.com/2006/09/year-in-words.html
September 22, 2006 20:47
A Waterfall of Words
http://raymondafoss.blogspot.com/2006/09/waterfall-of-words.html
September 21, 2006 22:58
Hope in the Words
http://raymondafoss.blogspot.com/2006/09/hope-in-words.html
July 13, 2006 15:34
Poetry in My Soul
http://raymondafoss.blogspot.com/2006/07/poetry-in-my-soul.html
July 11, 2006 21:50
Four Poems
http://raymondafoss.blogspot.com/2006/07/four-poems.html
edited January 18, 2016
Message in a Bottle – v3
http://raymondafoss.blogspot.com/2016/01/message-in-bottle-v3.html
edited March 21, 2015
Flash of Joy – v5
http://raymondafoss.blogspot.com/2015/03/flash-of-joy-v5.html   
January 31, 2004 19:28-19:36
Into Being
http://raymondafoss.blogspot.com/2004/02/into-being.html  
 
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